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1Writing The Plaza Mystery Wed Jan 27, 2010 4:23 pm

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*Minybuddie is having a normal day. Everything is going smooth. It's an ordinary day for him. But when he starts heading for the Plaza, a bunch of police tape is blocking it. 2 guards & Rory are standing in front of it.*

Minybuddie: "Hey! What's going on with the Plaza?"
Red Guard Penguin: "That is top secret information, sir."
Minybuddie: "But I'm a fully registered secret agent!"
Rory: "Er... Guys. It's okay. He's a friend of mine."
*Both agents nod their heads.*
Rory: "Can you guys excuse us for a moment?"
*Agents nod their heads & fly away on jet packs*
Minybuddie: "Rory! What's going on?"
Rory: "Well, there was a mysterious earthquake going on in the Plaza the other day that only happened there. We closed it off & we asked a penguin to check if it was safe."
Minybuddie: "Oh, who checked?"
Rory: "A penguin named Pizzazz Peni."
--Hehe I used myself XD--
Minybuddie: "Who's that?"
Rory: "She's known as 'Pizza' around here."
Minybuddie: "Ohh! Yeah! I've heard of her! Go on. So what happened when she checked?"
Rory: "Eh... It wasn't good. The ground started shaking heavily. She escaped 1 second before it exploded!"
Minybuddie: " :O Whoa! Is she okay?!"
Rory: "Sort of. A wounded flipper is all, she's been in her igloo ever since."
Minybuddie: " :O What happened next?"
Rory: "We have not found many clues of what could have caused this, but all we found after the explosion was a tiny clump of fur."
Minybuddie: "I suspect Herbert did this?"
Rory: "No. The fur wasn't white. It was brown."
Minybuddie: "Whoa..."
Rory: "We're afraid it could've been something worse than Herbert."
*A sudden shaking starts in the Plaza again.*
Rory: "TAKE COVER!!!"
*Rory runs to the night club, leaving Minybuddie alone. The shaking stops, & Minybuddie climbs through the police tape & explores.*

Minybuddie: *talking to himself* "Whoa!"
*Minybuddie walks around to the area where the explosion was. He looks inside of the hole & sees nothing but ash & burned stuff. He tries to pick up something that could be evidence, but it quickly disintegrates into ashes & falls back into the hole.*
Minybuddie: "Seems like everything was burned up pretty badly. . ."
*BillyBob comes into the forest, & sees Minybuddie in the Plaza."
BillyBob sign : "Hey! Minybuddie! Get out of the Plaza! It's a hazardous place for any penguin. peng1 "
Minybuddie: "Yessir!"
*Minybuddie starts leaving, & the Plaza starts shaking really hard.*
BillyBob sign : "AAAAH!!"
*BillyBob runs & screams a girly scream.*
Minybuddie: " :O "
*Minybuddie heads for the forest, but the Plaza ground starts caving in. He runs as fast as possible to reach the forest, until he runs out of breath & drops down. He uses all his strength to stay up to safety, & passes out from trying too much. He then slides down into the pit.*
*Pizza, for the first time is out of her igloo & sees this.*
Pizza: " :O MINYBUDDIE!!"
*Pizza runs to the hole & uses the flipper that isn't broken to save Minybuddie. She fails at trying, & ends up falling into the hole with him.*
*Rory hears a scream & runs into the Snow Forts. For a quick second, he sees the tip of Pizza's flipper, & Minybuddie's hat flying feather - like down the hole.*
Rory: " affraid I must contact the agents!"
*Rory grabs his spy phone phne & calls all of PSA. The Blue & Red guard penguins come back.*
Blue Guard Penguin: "Rory! We received a call throughout the agency! Is there an emergency?"
Rory: "Yes. . . Pizza & Minybuddie fell down the hole in the Plaza."
*Rory points to the Plaza, where the agents see for a second Minybuddie's hat drifting softly into the hole. The moment it disappears inside of it, the hole turns back to the way it looked when it exploded before.*
~ TO BE CONTINUED ~

Please comment your thoughts. ;] It took a long time to make this.

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2Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Wed Jan 27, 2010 4:27 pm

dinoboyzach2

dinoboyzach2

thats was amazing i love the part when billybob runs screaming like a girl lol! if minybuddie doesnt make that a move then someone will!

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3Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Wed Jan 27, 2010 4:29 pm

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dinoboyzach2 wrote:thats was amazing i love the part when billybob runs screaming like a girl lol! if minybuddie doesnt make that a move then someone will!

Yeah. Razz I might change the characters a little & make it myself if it isn't used.

& I loved it when I put BillyBob running & screaming like a girl. lol!

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4Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Wed Jan 27, 2010 4:32 pm

dinoboyzach2

dinoboyzach2

wel i dont care if u change the charcyers casue anyone who plays in this will be lucky to be in such an awsome movie

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5Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:22 pm

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dinoboyzach2 wrote:wel i dont care if u change the charcyers casue anyone who plays in this will be lucky to be in such an awsome movie

Thanks! :] You're such a nice dude. You deserved that Trainee Mod. ;]

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6Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:27 pm

Igna6750plusCP

Former Staff
Igna6750plusCP

Amazing!!!!!! I love it!! its AWESOME! Laughing Face

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7Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:30 pm

dinoboyzach2

dinoboyzach2

thanks pizza!

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8Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:34 pm

Igna6750plusCP

Former Staff
Igna6750plusCP

She's right, You deserve it.

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9Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Wed Jan 27, 2010 11:11 pm

Jaden 64

Moderator
Jaden 64

Great Script! I couldn't do better myself! Laughing Face Hope this movie comes out!

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10Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Thu Jan 28, 2010 4:37 am

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Thanks everyone! Your replies mean a lot to me. smiley

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11Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Thu Jan 28, 2010 4:37 am

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dinoboyzach2 wrote:thanks pizza!

No problem! :]

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12Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Thu Jan 28, 2010 4:38 am

Igna6750plusCP

Former Staff
Igna6750plusCP

I hope that too. This movie sounds EPIC!!!!!! Laughing Face

PS TO PIZZA: You're welcome!

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13Writing SUPER!!! Thu Jan 28, 2010 9:37 am

Ml20

Aqua Grabber Pilot
Ml20

AMAZING 5/5 STARS!!!!!!!!!!! IF NO ONE LIKES THIS THEN THEIR CRAZY!!!
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keep up the good work pizza pizza pizza pizza lol
(btw today im going to write part 3 of that script i made now...)

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14Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Thu Jan 28, 2010 1:49 pm

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Ml20 wrote:AMAZING 5/5 STARS!!!!!!!!!!! IF NO ONE LIKES THIS THEN THEIR CRAZY!!!
Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face Laughing Face
keep up the good work pizza pizza pizza pizza lol
(btw today im going to write part 3 of that script i made now...)

Thanks. Laughing Face Nobody likes my video ideas usually. -.- One of the videos of mine that took me 2 hours to make got only rated 2 stars. sad Meh. y face

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15Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Thu Jan 28, 2010 4:03 pm

dinoboyzach2

dinoboyzach2

well thats tupid....any video deserves at least 3 stars

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16Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Thu Jan 28, 2010 5:16 pm

Guest



Nice Movie it has a lot of Mysteryish, Actionish Comedy(ish?) on it Laughing Face















P.S This is a compliment

17Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Thu Jan 28, 2010 5:17 pm

dinoboyzach2

dinoboyzach2

lol thats alot of ishes lol!

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18Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Fri Jan 29, 2010 6:37 am

Igna6750plusCP

Former Staff
Igna6750plusCP

LOL yeah

PS: Is misteryish actually a word?!

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19Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Fri Jan 29, 2010 11:31 am

Ml20

Aqua Grabber Pilot
Ml20

no i dont think its a real word Razz

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20Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Fri Jan 29, 2010 1:28 pm

dinoboyzach2

dinoboyzach2

no its not...but watever he just did that to make as many ish'es he could.

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21Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Fri Jan 29, 2010 2:37 pm

Igna6750plusCP

Former Staff
Igna6750plusCP

2 Stars? Wow, and I always get 5 stars... The persons that rate you 2 stars are Retarded. I feel like Everyone deserves 5 Stars!

https://www.youtube.com/user/igna6750

22Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Fri Jan 29, 2010 2:41 pm

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Igna6750plusCP wrote:2 Stars? Wow, and I always get 5 stars... The persons that rate you 2 stars are Retarded. I feel like Everyone deserves 5 Stars!

Thanks! :] It was my fave & most funny CPMV that got 2 stars. Razz

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23Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Fri Jan 29, 2010 3:06 pm

Igna6750plusCP

Former Staff
Igna6750plusCP

Whoever did rate it that way is a Retarded N00b

https://www.youtube.com/user/igna6750

24Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Fri Jan 29, 2010 3:47 pm

Ml20

Aqua Grabber Pilot
Ml20

people theese days have no scence for good videos ¬.¬ btw i just finished my newest video Club Penguin- A Dark Future... Its awsome, almost as good as this script Very Happy



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25Writing Re: The Plaza Mystery Fri Jan 29, 2010 3:49 pm

dinoboyzach2

dinoboyzach2

wait, wat?! that music part made no sense

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