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This movie is actually written by our "P I Z Z A" Laughing Face *claps* I actually edited some of the scripts, sorry Sad

About the Movie: A penguin named "Pizzazz Peni" discovered a bombing on the Pet Shop when she was adopting a puffle. Then An Agent named Sodaguy08 came in and tried to fix the problem along with his friend Rory. Luckily, Pizzazz Peni recorded the whole thing that happened on the Pet Shop on her phone but discovered a ninja sillhouette recorded even though she didnt see it personally. She heard a continous beeping and she was lucky she got out of the pet shop 1 second before the bomb exploded.

(Theres more Laughing Face)


Heres a Trailer Laughing Face


Part 1:


I know its really not that good but okay Laughing Face



Last edited by Sodaguy08 on Sat Feb 06, 2010 2:48 pm; edited 2 times in total

Greeno

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Cool! CAN I HELP? Laughing Face
lol

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hmmm i already have the thing almost finished and maybe i might give u credit as the Sillhouette Laughing Face

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Oscar One

This is pretty cool!

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dinoboyzach2

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"NOT THE PUFFLES!!!!!" LOL anway awsoem trialer, btw did u ask pizza if u could do this?

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well i said i want to do it and i dont think she said anything about it Laughing Face

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Geoff

Honestly, that was terrible.
And here is why. Too many titles, not enough clips. Trailers are not just titles. They MUST explain what is going on with video clips, not just titles. The key framing for the titles fails. It's shaky.
You should have spelt the word "One" rather than just '1'. There is too much space between the main title and the 'Coming Soon'.
A trailer is supposed to make someone want to see it, I really don't want to watch this movie from what I've seen.
And the music, a mystery is it's own genre. You don't put suspenseful/action music in a mystery. The fact that it's a mystery means we don't know what's going on. There should be a mysterious music.

But I must congratulate you on your effort. Also you managed to make it fit YouTube's wide-screen. Something CP video makers seem never do.

All in all, you took PIZZA's great Idea and turned it into some plot-hole filled mysterious suspenseful-confusing, cra-ppy edits movie. I really hope the trailer is nothing like the movie.

Don't get me wrong. I'm not saying any of this to be mean. It's so you can learn and make it better.


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Well i think i might be good at making movies and ur right im TERRIBLE at making trailers Laughing Face

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Wow you took that pretty good. I figured this would turn into a flame topic. lol


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no i think its like a motivation to me Laughing Face

P I Z Z A

P I Z Z A

Thank you for giving me credit.
But first of all, I told you that I WAS NOT SURE that I wanted you to use this. I wanted to make it myself. I'm sorry. Please, please, remove the video until I'm ready.
Correction: I read the description this time. (Before I scanned it quickly.) It's completely different than my idea. You can use it, just CHANGE THE CHARACTERS. Do not use me, & change the name.

& also, my username isn't Pizzas Peni. Everyone confuses that, I'm not angry about it. =P Accept it's usually Pizza Peni. o_O Anyway...

Minybuddie wrote:All in all, you took PIZZA's great Idea and turned it into some plot-hole filled mysterious suspenseful-confusing, cra-ppy edits movie. I really hope the trailer is nothing like the movie.
I wouldn't say it was a bad trailer, but I didn't like the remix.

Although thanks for saying my idea was great. ;]

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Edited by Pizza 2 times in total.

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Well the character didnt change but im gonna have an actress to play Pizzazz Peni Laughing Face

P I Z Z A

P I Z Z A

Sodaguy08 wrote:Well the character didnt change but im gonna have an actress to play Pizzazz Peni Laughing Face

No...
No, no, no. LOL.

First of all, that's not what I said.

I said:
CHANGE THE CHARACTERS. Do not use me, & change the name.

Don't get an actress to play me. Either remove the video or remove me & change the name. Your choice.

I'm not trying to start a fight here or upset you in any way. Just please. . . Don't use me in it & don't get an actress. If you want me in it just ask me. :\ Nobody can be me better than me myself... Ooo I should make that a quote. XD

Either way... Just REMOVE THE VIDEO or CHANGE IT.

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OMG I know thats a good quote Laughing Face Okay im gonna change Pizzazz Peni Laughing Face

P I Z Z A

P I Z Z A

Sodaguy08 wrote:OMG I know thats a good quote Laughing Face Okay im gonna change Pizzazz Peni Laughing Face

Thanks. & change the title to something else that MATCHES the video, too. =P

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okay but hmmmm what should i name it? I already came up with 2

"The Silhouette" & "Bombed Pet Shop"

P I Z Z A

P I Z Z A

Sodaguy08 wrote:okay but hmmmm what should i name it? I already came up with 2

"The Silhouette" & "Bombed Pet Shop"

I think you should call it "The Pet Shop Bombing" or "Pet Shop Mystery" then put creepy music & a thunder bolt sound. XD

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y? u dont like "The Sillhouette"?

P I Z Z A

P I Z Z A

Sodaguy08 wrote:y? u dont like "The Sillhouette"?

IDK what it means. :P

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it means that black shadowy figure on Pinkgirl Sji's phone Laughing Face

P I Z Z A

P I Z Z A

Oh! LOL. That's not the main idea though. It's the bomb in the pet shop. Isn't it? Whatever, you choose. ;]

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yeah but the shadow CAUSED the bombing Laughing Face

P I Z Z A

P I Z Z A

Sodaguy08 wrote:yeah but the shadow CAUSED the bombing Laughing Face

OHHHHH! I get it now! Haha. ;] Use that then.

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haha i know right Laughing Face

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not trying to be double posting but....
Part 1 out Laughing Face

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